For everyone following this Rich helped me out and cleaned up my copy. Here is his version

Hello (add first name if you have it),

What would a page one Google ranking do for your business?

I currently rank over 100 pages for event planners on page one of Google and in less than 2 minutes you will see your company website ranking on page…[Read more]

Thanks for the response Mark. Very excited by my first sale. Gearing up for a massive email launch on Monday. I’ve found that people in my Niche are  ery busy on Fridays.

Big Happy

Thanks Brian,

My concern is saying No without sounding negative so I’m always trying to figure out ways to say I can’t do that and finding ways to convert that into what I can do.

Big Happy

My big question is how to track this hits and I’m also concerned about whether these hits are tracking bot hits.

Big Happy

Thanks Brian. Appreciate the time.

Just bumping this up to see if there is an answer.

Adding to the list of questions-

How is it determined as to what site will show up first?

Thanks

Big Happy

On my first call when I put up there website I thought the guy was gonna flip out. He absolutely loved it.

I used the following script when I was given the chance. I said,

“I do my ranking a little different. Rather than try to get your business and then ranking your site I chose to prove my ability by ranking a site for my keywords and…[Read more]

Thnaks Justin. good Luck